Can you please correct my sentence?

Question

As discussed with you on Email, we have configured system on the

Cloud and it is reachable now.

Kindly let us know once the system: X is ready for the for the configuration

so that we can perform the remaining task on X system.

Answer 1

Dear [recipient's name],



As discussed earlier we have now configured the Cloud system, which is ready for use.

Please let us know when system X is ready for configuration so we may perform the remaining task on it.

Best,

[your name]

Answer 2

Hi, here is another version:

As previously discussed via email, we have configured your system so that you may now utilize the Cloud.

Please let us know once your system is ready for configuration so that we can perform the remaining tasks.

Be well,

John

Answer 3

As discussed with you on Email, we have reconfigured your system on the Cloud so it is now accessible to you.

Kindly let us know when the system X is ready for the final configuration so we can perform any remaining tasks.