
Reema N.
asked 04/14/20What is the answer to this question
What is wrong with this sentence?
The new student is nearly seven-feet tall, I really hope he wants to join our basketball team.
A. It’s a fragment
B. It’s a run-on
C. There’s a spelling mistake
D. The comma is not needed after “tall”
3 Answers By Expert Tutors
Erik H. answered 04/15/20
Creative Specialist with Master of Arts in Education
the answer is B... it's a run on sentence...
it's really 2 sentences...
hope this helps!
Erik
Anna L. answered 04/14/20
College Latin Instructor, MA and BA Latin, 7-year Tutoring Experience
A. A fragment consists of an incomplete thought. Since there is both a subject and a verb in this sentence (the bare minimum for a complete thought), it's not a fragment. So A is out.
B. Bingo. It's a run-on. You already have a subject ("student") and verb ("is") to complete your thought. But then the sentence continues with another whole subject ("I") and verb ("hope") combo. Now, to make this a correct sentence, all you would have to do is add a comma and a conjunction (and, but, yet, or, etc.), but there's only a comma and no conjunction. Therefore, it's got to be a run-on.
C. No spelling mistakes here.
D. Not quite. While the comma by itself is incorrect, if you left it out it would just be even more of a run-on sentence. To make it NOT a run-on sentence, you need both the comma AND the conjunction after the first complete thought.
Tamar S. answered 04/14/20
Cert. Secondary Education Teacher. Math, History, Writing Tutor.
The sentence is a run-on sentence. For starters, according to the site, http://writing.umn.edu/sws/assets/pdf/quicktips/run-ons.pdf the definition of a run-on sentence is: A run-on sentence occurs when two or more independent clauses are not joined correctly. ... There are two types of run-on sentences: fused sentences and comma splices. A fused sentence occurs when independent clauses run together with no marks of punctuation or coordinating conjunctions to separate them
Those are two independent clauses. You can put a period where the comma is, and it would still make sense. I hope this is helpful.
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Julia B.
The most obvious error is the comma splice: there should be a period, not a comma, after "seven feet tall." Using a comma here instead of a period creates a run-on sentence. The second error is the hyphenation of "seven-feet". The new student is simply "seven feet tall." Seven modifies only the word feet. An adjective phrase is hyphenated when the two (or more) words preceding a noun together constitute an adjective phrase, e.g. "This skirt has a two-and-a-half-inch hem," or "The garage entrance has an eight-foot clearance."04/14/20