How do I write a really good essay?

Question

I've been struggling for about a year in my English Literature and History A-Level classes as I just can't write a persuasive, flowing, coherent and comprehensive essay. The main problem I think is that my structure is messy and I stray from the topic a lot so the teacher marking my work gets confused. Another issue with my work is that it is rarely persuasive, but I don't really know where I am going wrong or why. I would love some actual advice, so far all I have got from my teachers is 'oh, make it more concise' but I need actual instructions on what to do next, what to change, because I'm a hard working student and I will literally do what ever it takes to get an A this summer. 

Answer 1

Hi Katie,

 

What we can offer here is rather limited.  If you need more help, there are many great tutors available to work with your particular need(s).

 

The best advice I would give you is to take time before you write an essay.  Don't focus on what position you plan to take, but focus on the examples you should use.  Take a position that you can defend well.  (Also, notice that I said "examples".  For persuasive essays, as much as possible use concrete examples, not just reasoning.)

 

Then, take time to make an outline and pre-write your thesis statement.  The best way to organize your essay may not be the the way the examples come to mind.  Organize them in a logical way.

 

When your done writing, take time to proofread.

 

One more thought ...  If you haven't done this yet, re-write one of your essays based on your teacher's comments.  Bring it back to the teacher, and you should understand better how the teacher wants you to write your essays.

 

I hope this helps.

 

Paul L.