Debbie B. answered 05/20/19
Proofreading and Editing Specialist with 20+ years of experience
To me, it sounds like your natural pacing can really keep the story moving forward. You sound like it will be a chore to do it any other way. Go with your gut and stick to your style. It sounds like you are sensitive to the rhythm of the story and you intersperse very short scenes (chapters) with longer ones. All good stuff. Of course, make sure you have a pro edit it. Good luck!