Can the phrase "To start in," be used to introduce the first idea in a sequence, just like we can use"First"?

Answer 1

I would say no.

When writing an essay or paper, it's best to be as concise (clear) as possible and use language that is appropriately formal. If you're writing a paper for academics, you'd want to use short and to-the-point language.

"To start in," is an informal phrase in reference to another, and denotes long-winded, boring and often irritating speech. Additionally, it is most often used not a the beginning of a sentence, but as an action.

e.g. "She started in on all the different ways she could make a casserole."

When beginning a sentence for a list or sequence of events, using "First," or "Firstly," is a better option, but there are other ways of doing so as well. You'll specifically want to look up what are called "transition words."

Good luck!

Answer 2

Hi Nieves,

Yusra has given an excellent answer to the use of "to start in." However, I wondered if you were asking about the phrase, "to start with" which would not carry the negative connotation. It could be used to begin a list of things, although it is more informal and would be used more in informal conversation than in an essay.

Example: What are your reasons for not taking that class?

Well, to start with, I don't care for the professor. I also already have a full schedule, and the time just wouldn't work well.

Hope this helps.

Julie