Jasmine F.

asked • 04/20/15

Could someone assist me in revising this sentence?

English is not my forte. 
I was told this sentence sounds awkward:
"His father worries Henry has a death wish and asks the narrator, who seems to be his son’s old friend, for advice, but Henry reminds them of their father’s suicide."
I'm having trouble rephrasing it to make it clear that the narrator’s dad committed suicide, and that is why Henry’s dad is talking to him about Henry. 

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Nathan B. answered • 04/20/15

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