4 Answered Questions for the topic Revisions

How could I revise this sentence to add voice?

The Salem Witch Trials were dangerous.
Revisions English Writing Editing

04/22/15

Is this sentence written correctly?

I'm writing an essay and having issues. My writing tends to sound awkward. This was my first draft of the sentence: "His father worries Henry has a death wish and asks the narrator, who seems to... more
Revisions English Writing Editing

04/20/15

Could someone assist me in revising this sentence?

English is not my forte.  I was told this sentence sounds awkward: "His father worries Henry has a death wish and asks the narrator, who seems to be his son’s old friend, for advice, but Henry... more

03/24/15

i need some help with explaining that with a minimum wage increase that americans will feel more independent without depending on government assistance

i need help putting it altogether .   i need some help with explaining that with a minimum wage increase that americans will feel more independent without depending on government... more

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