Sarina K. answered 6d
Essay Writing Coach with 10+ Years Experience Across All Levels
When it comes to creative writing, proofreading and revision are two very different steps, but both are essential for making your story shine. Revision is about the content; this is where you look at your story as a whole and ask the big questions. Does your plot make sense? Are your characters consistent and believable? Does each scene serve a purpose or could it be cut or reworked? Pay attention to pacing, tension, and voice. You might notice that a scene feels flat, or that dialogue isn’t revealing enough about a character, and that’s exactly what revision is for. At this stage, don’t worry too much about commas or spelling; focus on making the story itself stronger.
Proofreading, on the other hand, is about polishing the language and ensuring your writing follows the conventions of standard English. Here, you check for spelling mistakes, grammar errors, awkward phrasing, and consistency in things like tense, point of view, or character names. In fiction, proofreading also includes catching small issues that might pull the reader out of the story, like repetitive words, missing articles, or inconsistent dialogue tags. It’s best to approach proofreading after you’ve done the big-picture revision, so you’re not constantly rewriting while trying to clean up minor errors.
Some strategies for fiction proofreading include reading your work aloud to catch clunky sentences or unnatural dialogue, using a printed copy to spot errors more easily than on a screen, and taking breaks between writing and editing so you can approach your text with fresh eyes. You can also keep a list of your personal common mistakes, such as overusing adverbs or starting sentences with “and," and check for them specifically. Reading similar books in your genre can also help you identify whether your style matches the tone and flow you’re aiming for.
Keep in mind that all creative writers have a unique sense of style and writing quirks. You may not need to worry about sentence fragments or overly flowery language as much as an academic writer would, as long as it is stylistic choice that is true to you and remains consistent throughout the work.
I’m happy to help with both revision and proofreading if you want another set of eyes on your story. Sometimes it’s easier to see patterns, inconsistencies, or opportunities for stylistic improvement when someone else is looking alongside you!