Jorge Z. answered 05/25/22
Experienced High School English Teacher
Because I do not see a specific excerpt, I cannot provide a specific answer. However, I am providing an example of how to format your response to this question.
Topic sentence: In the excerpt from Khaled Hosseini's novel, A Thousand Splendid Suns, a social issue that is explored in the text is __________.
Concrete Detail: For example, ______ states, " [textual evidence]" (#).
Commentary: Explain the significance of your textual evidence and how it is an example of the social issue you identified in your topic sentence.
Next Sentence: This problem is/is not still evident today because ______.
Concrete Detail: Provide supporting evidence.
Commentary: Explain how the evidence reveals whether the identified social issue is still evident today.
Hope this helps!