Joyce K. answered 09/23/20
Language Instructor
Chirag is spot on! More personal, easy for the reader to identity with the protagonist. Can be more immersive, but you can also do the same with a 3rd person limited perspective. After entering the tunnel, immersed in total darkness, she muffled a scream, feeling a creature's tail swipe her leg. She wished she had never entered it but also knew a stranger had followed her there. She stood, shaking, listening for any footsteps or any breathing other than her own breath and her heartbeat.
Lauren L.
tysm too!09/29/20
Howard S.
09/24/20