Getting the correct meaning by analyzing a sentence?

Question

I have following paragraph and trying to understand what it clearly mention.> This paper shows several extensions and discusses the topology> approach, while recognizing that reconstruction of height jumps is a> challenge (A, 2010; B, 2007) and describing problems related to> intersection lines and jump edges between two segments.first sentence is clear to me. I have problem with while part. It contains that also. So, I am confused. I want to know this and describing.. is related to that or while.If I simplify my question,Does the stricture of second part is> 1. while recognizing (X) and describing (Y) or.. 2. while recognizing that> (P and describing Q).**UPDATE:**If I like to modify 1, Would it be possible to use one recognition as while recognizing (X) and (Y). I think yes, But Y is too long, Does this misguide the reader?Can anyone help me to get the idea of this. thanks

Answer 1

This is actually a pretty good attempt at a clear thesis statement. Your challenge here is fairly common - it is pretty much the wording. Students often make their writing more complex than it needs to be because to use simpler language feels less scientific or valid.

Let's take a look.

"while recognizing that reconstruction of height jumps is a challenge and describing problems related to intersection lines and jump edges between two segments"

First, simplify:

"while recognizing the challenge of reconstruction of height jumps"

Second, note that the entire "while" part focuses on "challenges" or "problems."

So, include them all in one string because that's where they belong:

"while describing the challenges of reconstructing height jumps, intersection lines, and jump edges between two segments."

Don't be afraid to use plain English, even if your subject matter is complex. It makes it easier to read and leads to quicker comprehension and higher approval of the subject matter.

If you feel there is a difference between "recognizing" and "describing," then take a closer look. You are probably referring to the same thing - you are simply "discussing" the subjects.

Hope this helps ;)