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Question

I myself, as a creation of God is imperfect for I'm tainted by sins. I thought of a way to pay for my wrong-doings as well as to make my savior Jesus Christ proud. It is to help all the homeless people in the world. Money will never buy love because it's overprice. Prior to my dream, I have a series of goals to achieve. Receiving my master's degree in System's Engineering at University of Arizona is the first step. Once employed at my dream job, Dell. I will maximize my mission on helping the homeless here in my community. Then, I will start saving money for a small business and convert it into a worldwide company along with the help of becoming a professional multi-millionaire boxer. This will solve the homelessness in the world. Blessings come to those who look back to where they came from and show gratitude to people who have done good deeds to them.

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