No, the punctuation is not correct.
It's not correct because using so many commas suggests a totally different meaning.
For example, using the comma after "finds" suggests that the words "each artifact in his quest he finds" are not essential to the meaning. In fact, they are totally essential to the meaning.
Review what's called restrictive vs. non-restrictive modifiers and it will help you.
If you have more questions let me know.
Original: Each artifact In his quest he finds, Puts under a Scope, and then knows why
Correction: Each artifact in his quest he finds he puts under a scope and then knows why.
Make it clearer also what "then knows why" means.
Howard S.
08/06/22
Howard S.
08/06/22
Ethan B.
Thank you for your response. Here's the full context: Each artifact In his quest he finds He puts under a Scope and then knows why he's stunted. if i remove the "and" and add a comma after "scope" does that change the meaning?08/06/22