Where should commas be placed in this sentence?

Question

Are commas necessary anywhere in this sentence other than where I currently have them? Are they optional?

Primary Colors follows Governor Jack Stanton, the fictional equivalent to Bill Clinton, and his campaign team both in the public eye and behind the scenes across his rise to the presidency.

Answer 1

I disagree with Jon. I think it's fine just the way you wrote it.

Answer 2

commas before and after phrase "both in the public eye and behind the scenes"