What's the best way to write this sentence?

Question

What's the best way to use commas or punctuation in this sentence for flow? What's the best way to write it overall?

Given title IX’s distinction of the word “sex,” which is biological, unlike gender which is a construct, the proposed bills are constitutional.

Answer 1

Hi Jordan,

Here is the best way to write the sentence in comparison to how you wrote it above:

Given Title IX’s distinction of the word “sex”, which is biological, unlike "gender", which is a construct, the proposed bills are constitutional.

Answer 2

Given Title IX's use of the word "sex," which is innate and biological, over "gender," which is a construct, the proposed bills are constitutional.

There are many ways to write this sentence depending on what you mean, though-- the most confusing part of it is "distinction," which implies that Title IX distinguishes between sex and gender in its policies. I took it to mean that Title IX uses the specific diction of "sex" over "gender," hence my suggestion.