Jordan B.

asked • 10/25/21

What's the best way to reword/phrase the bolded part of the sentence for clarity?

I understand there were places where I could've worded or argued this better or included better evidence, but I just wanted to ask about my thesis specifically since it led to most of the other problems with the essay. 

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