Jordan B.

asked • 10/25/21

What's the best way to condense this sentence for clarity?

Bob takes more of a liberal approach on the matter and Amy takes more of a conservative approach on the matter.

Rachel N.

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Between Bob and Amy, Bob takes a more liberal approach and Amy and more conservative one.
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Rachel N.

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Amy takes a more conservative one. sorry typo.
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Fariha N.

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Hi Jordan! Thank you for your question regarding your sentence and how to make it more concise. Here are a few possible ways to construct this sentence in a more condensed way: 1. Bob takes a liberal approach, whereas Amy takes a more conservative approach regarding the matter. 2. Although Bob takes a liberal approach on the matter, Amy's approach is more of a conservative one. 3. Bob and Amy's approaches on the matter differ; Bob's is more liberal whereas Amy's is more conservative. 4. Bob's approach to the matter is more liberal, whereas Amy's approach is more conservative.
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