Write the summary using the 5 W’s, 1 H technique

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Write the summary using the 5 W’s, 1 H technique.

TEXT 2. THE HACKSAW RIDGE MOVIE

In Lynchburg, Desmond Doss and his brother Hal are raised by a dysfunctional family since their father Tom Doss is an alcoholic war veteran of World War I that beats their mother Bertha. After a naughty fight with his brother Hal turns awry, Desmond Doss reads the Bible and vows not to harm another human in his life thereafter. Desmond then saves the life of a worker, experiencing a wholesome satisfaction in the process. In the hospital, he is smitten by a nurse, Dorothy Schutte, whom he then dates. After the United States enters the Second World War, both sons enlist, adding to the ire of the father who despises his sons joining the Army. The rigorous regimen of training in the Army requires Desmond to clear his firearms training, but after a huge tiff with his seniors, his father, an old corporal, intervenes to save Desmond from being court-martialed and serve with the Army as a medic. Then, got posted to Hacksaw Ridge, Okinawa. Desmond saved 75 men during the battle without firing a single shot. As an army medic with a strong desire to save lives, Desmond single-handedly evacuated wounded near enemy lines despite his own wounds. He was awarded with the Congressional Medal of Honor.

Answer 1

Hello, School,

I'm not sure who the audience is, nor the puropose of the communication. Assuming this is a synopsis of a movie or book, and that the purpose is to build awarenesss of an interesting topic of rreading/viiewing, I wroite the following:

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The life of Desmond Doss, a heroic survivor of WW2 who was awarded the Congressional Medal of Honor for his bravery in saving 75 men at the Hacksaw Ridge battle on Okinawa, does not follow an expected trajectory. His tumultous childhood in a dysfunctional family and alcoholic father, a WW1 veteran, marks his story as unique.

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Not great, but maybe there's an idea here you can use to get it right.

Bob