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asked  05/18/21Edit paragraph complex words
Hello,
Are you able to edit this paragraph by changing some words into a lot more complex words, and making it more understandable (if necessary)
Paragraph:
In this pragmatic, agitating, jaw-dropping, young-adult fiction novel written by S.E Hinton, it frequently scrutinises the themes of Class Prejudice, and The Importance of Surrogate Families. This novel consists of two rivaling gangs, the Greasers, and the Socs, having a greaser, Ponyboy, as the narrator. The Greasers grow up with struggles, and seem to suffer for their behavior, and occasionally, the Socs’ too. The Socs portrait comfortable and wealthy lives, yet, still tending to cause mischief. These two gangs tend to “settle their differences” by essentially causing violence.
1 Expert Answer
Here's how I might rephrase the writing in order to maximize cohesiveness, eliminate wordiness, and enhance the focus:
The Outsiders, by S.E. Hinton, is an insightful and sometimes agitating young-adult fiction novel which critically examines the themes of class prejudice as well as the importance of surrogate families. The novel focuses on two rival gangs - the Greasers and the Socs - and the consequences of their animosity. The narrator, Ponyboy, is a Greaser, which give the reader more insight into how his gang grew up and illustrates the hardships and struggles they face due to their class alignment. The Socs, on the other hand, seem to be the very portrait of comfortable and wealthy lives; however, they are also at the mercy of forces which cause them to engage in criminal activity and mischief - although they don't suffer the same discrimination as the Greasers. In essence, these two gangs tend to “settle their differences” by causing violence and commotion throughout the novel.
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Heaven M.
I was going to answer your question, until I saw your comment. Best of luck.05/18/21