Asked • 09/11/19

Why are pronouns used in this way in Nalo Hopkinson's "Shift"?

I just read the short story "Shift" by Nalo Hopkinson, which is [freely available online](http://www.nightmare-magazine.com/fiction/shift/). It's a modern, Caribbean-themed story inspired by Shakespeare's *The Tempest*.One thing which confused me on the first reading was the use of pronouns. The story starts off written in the second person:> “Did you sleep well?” she asks, and you make sure that your face is fixed into a dreamy smile as you open your eyes into the morning after.But then, not long after this, there are some paragraphs written in the first person:> She tell me say I must call her Scylla, or Charybdis.I didn't notice this pronoun switch at first, and when I did, I foolishly assumed it was an inconsistency in the writing. Turns out Nalo Hopkinson is a much better writer than that: for the paragraphs in second person, "you" refers to Caliban, while Ariel is "she"; for those in first person, "I" refers to Ariel, while Caliban is "he", and "you" is used to address the readers.**My question is: why switch pronouns in this way?** It's confusing on a first read - you only slowly realise that there's more than one viewpoint character - although it's all perfectly consistent once you figure out the pronoun scheme and treat the two types of paragraph separately. What does this stylistic choice add to the story?

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Debra N. answered • 09/22/19

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