Sentence rhythm?

Question

Writers are advised to read their work aloud to spot issues they wouldn't otherwise, and maybe work out what it'll take to fix them. Things you might otherwise miss [include](https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and-tools/reading-aloud/) poor explanations, errors of spelling, punctuatio and grammar, long or convoluted sentences, repetition, and poorly chosen register (what the source linked above calls tone). More subjective things [include](https://www.standoutbooks.com/reading-aloud-improve-writing/) problems with a sentence's rhythm or pace, or ["stilted" dialogue](http://www.writersdigest.com/writing-articles/stilted-dialogue).It's this second set of concerns I have a question about. Well, not so much stilted dialogue; the above link gives me a feel of what that is. I'm most worried I won't notice when a sentence doesn't have the right rhythm or pace. I can't help but give a rhythm to each sentence I write that feels like it makes sense as I'm doing it, but there are so many combinations of stress patterns and syllable counts and it feels like you could "fit music" to any of them. When checking for it on a re-read, is there anything specific I could check for that's easily overlooked?

Answer 1

I will build on her response (above). I like reading my own work aloud. Things jump out at me that wouldn't otherwise be obvious from the written page (well, my laptop). Good luck!

Answer 2

Instead of giving you specific advice, I suggest finding reading apps that will read the text out loud to you. In my work with the blind, I have found that this really helps. This is because the rhythm of the electronic reader is only based on the actual punctuation. So, although my blind clients may miss spelling errors, they completely get syntax, rhythm, etc.

I don't mean the really bad electronic sounding ones. I mean the ones that are more realistic. I believe Apple has some good ones if I remember correctly.

Also, on Microsoft Word, you can click the "view" tab. Then, click "Learning Tools". You can do some fancy stuff to make it easier to edit your paper!

For the specifics of your question, everyone has a specific style to their writing. I don't know your style. So, I can't really say what you might be missing. I think that I often see people attempt to use far too many slang words and phrases in dialogue. This tends to date your writing, and it can sometimes feel forced. That is really the main thing. If the dialogue feels "forced". Another thing I notice a lot is that writers will often mistake "struggle" for "character development". Just because you throw some mean things at your character does not mean your character develops!

The absolute best thing is to have a person who is very critical read it. Yes, your soul might be crushed a little, but you will truly know something is great when they say it is! then, you will feel like a boss!

I hope this helps you! Good luck!