How much does imperfect grammar put off an agent?

Question

I've written a novel and looking back the story line was good but the grammar wasn't great. I submitted the book to a few agents and received some constructive comments which I took on board. I have rewritten the story and corrected many of the errors. For instance I removed gerunds. Now that it's complete I'm getting hung up on other issues for instance starting sentences with quickly. I don't want to put agents off accepting my work but does this honestly matter? Should I just bite the bullet and start submitting the novel again?

Answer 1

I absolutely think that having an editor is crucial before showing your manuscript to an agent or publisher. Yes, a great story can be discerned between the lines...but why make your agent or publisher work so hard to see the polished gem underneath? They might even become frustrated and annoyed, and decide not to work with you for this reason alone. Good luck, and reach out if you need some more help. I'd be happy to work with you!

Answer 2

It's both a "yes" and a "no." When going through the traditional publishing process, you'll be assigned an editor to help you out until you reach a final version for publishing, and agents are aware of this.

In terms of finding one, sometimes agents will let you know the standards they hold to when selecting manuscripts, which can in turn help you determine where to send yours. Many can look beyond grammar to the meat of the work for quality, some cannot.

Incorporating the constructive comments is always a great idea, and that's a great point you could include in your query letter to an agent; it shows that you're willing to improve and are open to feedback.

In short, don't get hung up on the small things. The right agent will see beyond them if your story and concept are both solid. Keep on trying, and good luck to you!