How can I avoid word repetition in the following paragraph?
> Eri knelt down slowly and thought about her world. The one with the> solid **ground** in which she had stood all her life. Would that surface> break apart one day? And when it did, what would happen to her?> Perhaps she would end up floating aimlessly in a vast nothingness. Her> feet never touching the **ground** again. Her hands never finding anything> to hold onto.I've been trying to edit this for about an hour. It's like a chess dilemma I created myself. I can't replace *ground* with *surface* because I'm already using it in the next sentence. And it seems like *feet never touching the ground* is the most natural way of saying it. I think *feet touching the soil* and *feet touching the land* sound strange.Does anyone have a simple, effective way to solve this?
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What about "her feet never touching down again?"
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DONALD N.
Eri knelt and thought of her world today. The one with definition and form. She is familiar with her sensations of touch, in her knees, hands, feet as she grounds herself comfortably. But, when this anchor is lost, what of Eri? Drifting in a contactless ether without mooring. How to thrive in this place?10/14/24