Hannah H. answered 03/30/19
A future worship minister, I aim to help students like me.
The first thing I do is go through and shorten lengthy sentences, removing excess description and replacing phrases with single-worded synonyms. If I still have room to wean my paper down, I go through and delete unnecessary sentences - even if I think they add substance to the essay, sometimes you have to massacre the paper. After that, all you can do is combine sentences, remove transition words, and check for any places where you may be slightly repetitive.