
Henry I. answered 03/14/19
Experienced, Patient Math and English teacher
I love this question, Brittany. It is a very common problem for less experienced writers. At the same time, I think you have answered the question quite well. It is essential to read the material with the eyes/mind of a non-expert. This requires a little role playing on your part, so to speak. Apart from just getting more practice, I would also suggest that setting the piece aside for a period of time makes it a little easier to view it in the way you and I both described.
Best wishes