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Question

1.  My son's birthday party was one of the greatest experiences of our lives.

2.  I didn't think I could make the drive home from my stepdad's house.

3.  Briefly, time stood still.  It was only me and her.

4.  He told me to let the kids go cause this was the most fun that he has had in years. 

5.  I was doing it all on my own and needless to say, I was doing it right.

Answer 1

no mistake in this following sentences great job!