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Question

1. The job was very easy all I had to do  was open the store in the morning.

2.  If I had me a mechanic the salesman would be a whole different salesman.

3.  When I was fifteen or sixteen years old, I and my two youngest brothers were outside talking and the eldest was fixing on his ATV.

4.  Lisa and her friend proceeded to the bread isle trying to take their minds off the bug.

5.  As the game came to its climax it was just Sarah n Billy playing one on one. 

Answer 1

1. The job was very easy all I had to do was open the store in the morning.
2. If I had me a mechanic the salesman would be a whole different salesman.
3. When I was fifteen or sixteen years old, I and my two youngest brothers were outside talking and the eldest was fixed on his ATV.
4. Lisa and her friend proceeded to the bread isle trying to take their minds off the bug.
5. As the game came to its climax, it was just Sarah and Billy playing one on one.

 

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