More “sets of eyes”
1) If possible, ask more than one person to review your work. What is clear to one person may not be clear to another, and personal preference varies.
2) Give guidelines beforehand on what sort of feedback you would like. If you just want someone to check run-on sentences, you may not wish them to suggest how to rearrange your paragraphs.
3) As a social tip, don’t make your friends work for free! You can help them on a different assignment, give them snacks, etc. Even heartfelt thanks may be enough in some cases. If your work has an acknowledgments section, consider listing them there.
4) Do basic proofreading on your own before giving it to anybody else. It is annoying to be distracted by basic punctuation mistakes while trying to give more substantive criticism.
Using feedback
5) Enable commenting. This allows the person reading to make suggestions directly in the text rather than trying to describe it. Unlike edit access, it preserves your original work.
6) Consider your audience in interpreting feedback. It may be ok to use an acronym your dad doesn’t recognize if it is common knowledge in your field. For example: I would write out the phrase “polymerase chain reaction” for a lay audience, but for biologists I would just write PCR.
Writing process
7) Write a draft before editing. Done is better than perfect.
8) Iterate. Your first draft may look very different from your third (or fourth, or tenth, or twentieth…) Editing may give you ideas for additional draft material, which is ok!
9) Balance substance and style. Following conventions is a courtesy to your reader. It reduces their cognitive burden.