Celeste L. answered 02/12/25
University Student with Significant English Language Experience
The first two lines are good as they are. The second line provides more context for the action on the first line, and the transition word 'for' means that it wouldn't make sense to switch the lines as is. However, it would also work to switch the first two lines to:
It's showtime
So kiss goodbye
Or something similar. Honestly I think both sound good but I like how it is now.