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"Life of Pi " follows Piscine Molitor Pate's (Pi) survival journey after he becomes stranded on a lifeboat in the pacific ocean with a Bengal tiger named Richard Parker. He was surrounded by the zoo his family owned while growing up in Pendicherry, India, which ultimately inspired him to leam about the behavior and way of life of many animal species. Piscine, his unusual name, originated from a French swimming pool, which made him the target of mockery. However, he overcame this by taking on the nickname Pi. Pi practiced Islam, Christianity, and Hinduism simultaneously out of curiosity and openness, looking to all three faiths for comfort and spiritual truth. His perspective and actions during his journey on the sea are shaped by this extensive background. This book demonstrates how fear can control your choices and force you to think outside the box, adapt, and even sacrifice your morals in the fight for life.It emphasizes that living doesn't only mean remaining physically strong; it also means maintaining emotional resilience and making difficult decisions. In the face of fear, humans will do whatever it takes to survive.

Fear is a powerful emotion that may control and overwhelm you. Life of Pi indicates fears: fears of oneself, fears of other people, and fears of the unknown. Pi fears his companion on his journey, Richard Parker, a Bengal tiger, who has no mercy on his victims. Richard Parker and Pi have an almost understandable yet complicated relationship. Pi seems to understand Richard Parker's needs, as does Richard Parker understand Pis needs. Pi is content as long as he feeds Richard Parker, and Pi will continue to be content as long as Richard Parker keeps a safe distance from him. Pi evidently fears the future, as one does. Nevertheless, he doesn't allow this fear to influence him and he doesn't act recklessly. He is in somewhat control of his fear. Yann Martell writes "I must say a word about fear. It is life's only true opponent. Only fear can defeat life* (Martel, Pg. 161)Pi believes that in order to face your fear head-on, you must first acknowledge it. Fear is an expert at making you feel powerless and vulnerable. Pi fights fear through the use of his faith to maintain hope and his logical thinking abilities to solve problems which essentially makes him feel calm and distracted. By being resourceful and thinking of ways to survive, Pi keeps fear at a distance.

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Answer 3

Hi Sarah,

I have worked on your paper. I have attached the first two paragraphs. Words and punctuation in RED are my changes and inclusions. Words written in BLACK are your words and writing. Let me know what you think. ... Ms. Izzy.

"Life of Pi "

"Life of Pi " follows the survival journey of Piscine Molitor Pate. His survival journey begins the moment he realizes that he is stranded on a lifeboat somewhere in the vast Pacific Ocean. He soon discovers that he is not alone. His constant companion will be a Bengal tiger named Richard Parker. How will he survive? He has greater knowledge and understanding than he even realizes. Richard Parker, the tiger, will lead the way for Piscine, “Pi,” to come to know himself.

Piscine grew up surrounded by the zoo his family owned in Pendicherry, India. From the animals in this zoo, Pi would be inspired to learn about the behavior and way of life of many animal species. Pi would grow up simultaneously practicing Islam, Christianity, and Hinduism and because of his innate curiosity and openness, all of his life he would look to all three faiths for comfort and spiritual truth.