Is the "until" used correctly here?

Question

I used to dream 

of you

Coming true 

before my eyes

Until you broke 

the news.

Since then been hoping 

It is all untrue

Untrue.

Answer 1

Yes, the word "until" is used correctly in the given context. It indicates a change or shift in the situation or events being described. The speaker used to dream of something happening "before my eyes" until the news was broken, indicating that the dream or hope has been affected or altered by the news.

Answer 2

Hello. It appears that you are using the word "until" in poetry. The word "until" is being used correctly.