Ethan B.

asked • 02/22/23

Which sentence should i use?

"He had perfect pitch and discovered that with his whistle he could hack the phone system."


"He had perfect pitch, and he discovered that with his whistle he could hack the phone system."

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Anna L. answered • 02/22/23

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Ethan B.

If the part before the "and" isn't related to the second part, wouldn't i need to make them independent like the second sentence, or am i misunderstanding something?
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02/22/23

Anna L.

If they're truly unrelated than making them separate sentences would make that clearer. Without further context, having them together gives the impression that his perfect pitch was a factor in hacking the phone system.
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