Ethan B.

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Are these sentences grammatically correct?

"They begin investigating in order to determine the cause of the accident."


"They begin their investigation in order to determine the cause of the accident."

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Ethan B.

Thank you for your respone. I have one more question. Is this sentence more like the first one: "The archaeologist dives deep underwater to determine the condition of the ancient ship."
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Leah G.

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Well, I think that the importance is on “determine the condition of the ship” ; therefore, I would put it first. In order to determine the condition of the ancient ship, the archaeologist must dive deep underwater. These are very nuanced adjustments, but they are also what turns ‘good writing’ into ‘great writing’.
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