Does the following make sense, is it true?

Question

The average quantity of words, time, energy, and money anyone can save by speaking or writing concisely is 20%.

By articulating concisely, you will be able to reduce the length of sentences such as, “Never use a longer word where a short one will do” (11 words), to “Use the shortest words that work” (6 words), 32% fewer.

Articulating concisely lets you say or write the same messages you would be writing wordily in 60 minutes, in only 48 minutes. And it lets you use the 12-minutes you saved by expressing yourself concisely, to do other things with that time. Because you were able to do other work in those 12-minutes, and you were or will be paid for them, those 12 minutes are worth, and in a way you earned, $6.00.

Though at work, most people spend more than one

Answer 1

Yes, you can write concisely. Yet, only using short and concise words does not always work in writing or every day life. It is important to be concise when necessary because using too much jargon in writing can confuse people.