
Mary B. answered 11/17/22
Essay Writing/ General Writing Tutor
Hi Ethan, the comma is in the correct place!
(If this is a sentence you are writing, I suggest using the word "which" instead of "and." "Which" is grammatically correct in this case) but good work!


Leah G.
I like this suggestion. It flows better and is more precise.11/17/22
Mary B.
My apologies, I pressed send too soon... You can take out "and" & "that" and sub it for "which". So you can say, "His parents had a neglectful type of style, which is likely why...." and continue your sentence from there! Hopefully this cleared up the confusion!11/17/22