
Rachel K. answered 10/24/22
Certified English Teacher in Texas with 18 years of Teaching Experienc
The sentences mean the same thing; however, one of them is in active voice, and one is in passive voice. In passive voice, the subject of the sentence is not performing the action of the verb. For this sentence, the sunbeams are doing the piercing, not the forest canopy; therefore, the first example is in active voice and the second example is in passive voice. Passive voice is usually only reserved for scientific writing or occasionally for sentences where the noun performing the action is unimportant or irrelevant, but is usually frowned upon in most types of writing.

Rachel K.
"Pierced" is not functioning as an adjective in either sentence, and no you don't necessarily have to rephrase it to make it mean the same thing. For clarity, I would say the canopy is being pierced BY sunbeams. If the canopy were being pierced with a tool, like a kinfe, then WITH would work, but I don't think sunbeams count as a tool in this sentence. All that said, if you're writing poetry, you get a lot more leeway in what is considered "correct." Poetic license allows you to play with the rules a bit in order to achieve the desired effect of the line(s) of poetry.10/25/22
Ethan B.
Sorry, I just have one more question for clarity. Theses two sentences basically mean the same thing? "The canopy is pierced by sunbeams." The canopy is being pierced by sunbeams."10/25/22

Rachel K.
"Being pierced" implies that it is currently happening as you speak. "Is pierced" implies that it is a characteristic of sunbeams or of that particular canopy. Without the rest of your context, it's difficult to tell what the minor difference in meaning would be.10/25/22
Ethan B.
I'm writing a poem, so i'm trying to find a way to say the same thing in a different ways in order to fit the rhyme scheme i have. So, the passive voice sentence doesn't have to be phrased as "the canopy is being pierced by sunbeams" in order to have the same meaning as the active voice? Or am i using "pierced" as an adjective?10/24/22