Ethan B.

asked • 09/19/22

Is the comma correct here?

Every artifact

In his quest he finds

He puts under the

Scope, and then knows why

He's hated.


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Jennifer R. answered • 09/19/22

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No, because we need a subject to make the last clause independent: "...scope, and then he knows why he's hated." However, it creates an awkward, run-on sentence. What if you made it "...Scope. Then, he knows..."

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Ethan B.

Isn't the "he's" at the end of the sentence the subject of the clause?
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