
Alexandra H. answered 08/30/22
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Each artifact, One by one, he finds He puts under The scope and then knows Why.
If you format the poem as a sentence you can see more clearly that your commas are working perfectly. :)
The line "One by one, he finds" looks and sounds the oddest but it is properly punctuated based on the understanding we discussed in the previous question.
Ethan B.
Thanks for your response. I don't know why but the sentence confuses me. I want to paint the picture of him finding an artifact and then putting it under a scope, and repeating that one by one process several times. But i'm still unsure of that what the sentence is painting.08/30/22