Ethan B.

asked • 08/30/22

Are the commas correct in this stanza?

Each artifact,

One by one, he finds

He puts under

The scope and then knows

Why.



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Alexandra H. answered • 08/30/22

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Ethan B.

Thanks for your response. I don't know why but the sentence confuses me. I want to paint the picture of him finding an artifact and then putting it under a scope, and repeating that one by one process several times. But i'm still unsure of that what the sentence is painting.
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08/30/22

Alexandra H.

I think it's working. Is this part of a larger project?! I'd love to help you in revisions if you want to schedule some time ☺️
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08/30/22

Ethan B.

It is part of a bigger project, but this part in the only one i'm having an issue with. The rest is finished.
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08/30/22

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