is this correct?

Question

lets say i want to get the horse inside the barn, what would be the right way to say it? as of now this is how i write it, what happens if we get the horse inside the barn?

Answer 1

This really depends on what you are trying to say. If you are asking what happens, then it is a question about the consequences of putting the horse in the barn. If you just want to get him in there, say "Put the horse in the barn."

Answer 2

A way I would phrase it is: What happens if we were to lead the horse into the barn? or I wish the horse would go inside the barn.

Answer 3

Hi!

So, are you saying that you would write it this way: "What happens if we get the horse inside the barn?" That is a good way to write that if what you are asking in the story is about the reaction of the horse once it is in the barn, or if you are wondering about the condition of the barn once the horse goes inside.

However, if you just want that darn horse in the barn but you aren't wondering what will happen later, then it might be best to just say, " Let's put the horse in the barn now." or "I'm putting the horse in the barn, so you need to feed it!" Hahahaha!

It really is all about your character's motivation or intent.