Charles B. answered 05/18/23
Fostering a Love for Language and Literature for 20+ Years
Hey there!
Without seeing the actual essay, it's hard to respond to this is a specific way. But hopefully, I can give you some general insight into this!
I think the ending of the essay sounds pretty cool! It adds a touch of imagination and creativity to the topic of animals we eat. Imagining the life stories of these animals can make us think about the impact of our choices and how they connect to the stories Kristof shared about the geese. (Is this is essay you were discussing in class? https://www.nytimes.com/2008/07/31/opinion/31kristof.html )
By ending the essay this way, it brings a sense of empathy and makes us consider the lives and experiences of the animals we consume. It reminds us that every creature has a story, just like the geese Kristof wrote about. It encourages us to think beyond just seeing animals as food and instead consider the larger ethical and moral implications of our actions.
What are your thoughts on this ending? Do you find it engaging or thought-provoking? Let me know!