
Ariel H. answered 03/29/22
Honors BA in English Recipient and Freelance Tutor
Assuming this is in MLA 8:
- In the first citation, the last name should be before the first name (Broglio, Steven, et al.), the article title should not be italicized, and the date is in the incorrect location (date goes after the volume and issue numbers, and you generally don't include the month).
- In the second citation, there should be a period after the name and the date is incorrect (no comma after the number and each month is shortened to its first three letters - the correct date would be 20 Jul. 2017).
- In the third citation, there should be a comma (not a period) after "Repetitive Hits", you can exclude the website's title if the website title and the publisher are the same (keep the italicized USA Today), and the date is incorrectly formatted (it should be 12 Sep. 2017).
- In the fourth citation, there should be a comma after the last name, each word should be correctly capitalized in the title of the article (we capitalize each word in APA, not MLA), the journal title should be italicized, and the date should simply be 2018 because this is a journal article.
Good luck!

Ariel H.
My apologies! I meant to keep the italicized Washington Post, not USA Today.03/30/22
Andrea C.
For citation 3 there is no USA im confuse03/29/22