How do you write the following informal paragraph into formal paragraph.

Question

Juliet tries a really impossible plan to fake her own death. Romeo thinks his wife is dead and comes back to Verona and kills himself before Juliet wakes up. She is so sad that she kills herself. The families become friends when they find out about their kids’ deaths

Answer 1

Answer 2

One important way is to use more sophisticated, lesson common vocabulary.

Julie attempts an impossible plan to fake her own death. Romeo believes his wife is dead; therefore, he returns to Verona to kill himself before Juliet awakens. She is so exceedingly sorrowful that she commits suicide. Their families become friends when they learn of their children's demise.

You can also change the structure of the sentences to make more complex constructions. Ex.: Due to Romeo's believing his wife is dead, he returns to Verona to kill himself. The families become friends after learning of their children's demise.. .