What is a good thesis statement for racism?

Answer 1

Honestly, this question is too general (I.e., I’m lacking enough information to completely answer this question) for one to give a complete thesis statement.

To make a thesis statement:

1. I need to know what the topic is about (racism, in this case).
2. I need to know the context of the essay (I.e., argumentative, expository, narrative, or a descriptive essay.
3. I need a clear, concise statement to be made concerning the topic of racism (I.e., racism is prominent in society due to societal customs influenced by a past system of slavery).

Answer 2

Hi Jamie! A good thesis statement takes a clear stance on the topic you are writing about. It is broad enough to be able to write at length about, but specific enough that your paper stands out from others on the topic.

The process I usually suggest to students is outlined below:

1. Start with a three point thesis, which you hopefully learned to write at some point in your schooling! A three point thesis on this topic would look something like: In America today, racism is an issue that is ___, ___, and ___.
2. Then, take a look at your three points and see what they have in common. Write that down.
3. Try replacing your three individual points with that broader statement you just wrote.
4. Edit this new sentence for clarity and to make sure it connects to various parts of your essay.

Would you like to walk through this process together in a session? I also have a second step by step method, if this one doesn't work for you. Let me know, I'm free this coming week!