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I continued to rally supporters on the page. I shared writings, images, and designs made by the page members that promised a victorious Jan25. I tried to induce confidence and belief that youth would be capable of leading change. I also highlighted the government’s frightened reactions. I decided to compile all the information relevant to Jan25 in a document that was easy to print and to distribute online. It summarized the reasons for protesting and for choosing this day and these locations. It also described the unified chants that had been chosen and provided phone numbers for activists responsible for supporting arrested protesters and for redirecting demonstrators to other locations if the protests at any one place were obstructed. I uploaded the file to Google Docs, where more than 50,000 people accessed it. Its content was also disseminated through various online forums, political websites, Facebook pages, and Twitter accounts.

Answer 1

Here's an alternate suggestion if you'd like it short and sweet.

I shared writings, images, and designs made by other page members. My messages reinforced that youth are capable of leading change. I also highlighted the government’s frightened reactions. I compiled relevant information for Jan25 to distribute online via Google Docs. It summarized the reasons for the protest, important contact information, and explained the chants that had been chosen; more than 50,000 people accessed it.

Answer 2

Hi Jasmine,

Try this:

Rallying supporters on the page, I shared creative works of members who promised a victorious Jan25. While inducing confidence that youth are capable of leading change, I also highlighted the government’s frightened reactions. I compiled the relevant information, summarizing the reasons for protesting and the choice of the day and location, in a user friendly document to distribute online. The document also contained phone numbers for activists who support arrested protesters and redirect demonstrators away from obstructed areas. More than 50,000 people have accessed the file from Google Docs and its content was disseminated through various online forums.

-Melinda