Max M. answered 06/19/20
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Not sure what you're asking, but I can help with iambic pentameter questions. Are you supposed to write the 12 lines, or are you supposed to arrange the text given into 12 lines of pentameter, or something else?
For what it's worth, the lines you wrote are ROUGHLY iambic pentameter, but not perfectly so. Just right off the bat, I'd scan the first line:
aNON, as the HEAT beCOMeth MORE inTENSE, which is five beats, but the second foot is an anapest, not an iamb (as the HEAT), unless you elided it: as th' HEAT, which Shakespeare sometimes does, but usually indicates with apostrophes.
So hit me up, I'm happy to find a time today or tomorrow to help, but I'd need to know more about what you're looking for.