Write a structured paragraph using the 3 points outlined below on the topic: “Reasons for Childhood Obesity “

Question

Write 150 words paragraph

support paragraph with these points:

1. Unhealthy meals
2. Not enough physical activity
3. Parents model bad eating habits

Answer 1

Hello Isha,

For this writing assignment, what you have to do is elaborate upon each of the three main points listed within your 150-word paragraph. In fact, you may want to separate each point into its own paragraph and discuss it/them in further detail on their own, complete with an introduction before and a conclusion afterwards, to ultimately turn your writing into a short essay.

For each main point (unhealthy meals, not enough physical activity, parents modeling bad eating habits), give examples of their negative effects on children and how they ultimately contribute to and result in childhood obesity when not tended to over time. You can also provide specific examples for each main point in your writing (I.e. fast food and sugar consumption and commercialization, lack of daily physical exercise, not eating fruits and vegetables). This should allow you to create multiple sentences defending each of the above main points separately and together.

Good luck with your writing! Let me know if you would like me to tutor you as well.