does the punctuation here make sense?

Question

This disorder has reached epidemic proportions with approximately 4 4 % of physicians  reporting feelings of burnout in 2019; 14% of  those physicians report having suicidal thoughts :  a third sought any sort of intervention (Yates, 2020).  

Answer 1

Edit: This disorder has reached epidemic proportions, with approximately 44% of physicians reporting feelings of burnout in 2019; 14% of those physicians reported having suicidal thoughts and a third sought some sort of intervention (Yates, 2020).

Be careful of extra spaces in your writing; teachers get distracted by that and unconsciously lower your grade. As for the grammar, the author's overall assumption that the disorder has reached epidemic proportions is correct as is because the author is talking about something he or she believes is happening now, but what follows (the proof) should be past tense because it was collected in 2019 and the author is writing in 2020.