Deborah P. answered 06/19/19
English, Reading, Writing Coach
This exercise is an excellent way to use empathetic writing. I like to pretend that I am that child in the story looking at things from that child's point of view. A good way to do this is to do a quick W chart--who, what, when, where. Who is this child--how old, his home life, his experiences in school, etc. Then what -- what is the child seeing--is he seeing out the window of his bedroom, is his house in the city or out in the country, his reaction when seeing the snow, his memories of past snowy days, what does he do when he sees the snow, etc. Then when does this happen, how long will the snow story last, what time of year is it (fall, winter, spring),etc. Lastly where--what town or city is the child in, is he in his front or back yard, or in front of his barn or his father's store, etc. Hopefully, this little formula of Ws will help you get started.