
Kassia D. answered 04/17/14
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On the first question, I believe C would be more appropriate because the question asks about the development of the ideas. Therefore, I believe that making sure each paragraph is related to the main idea would be the correct choice.
However, I do think that organization is really important as well. I just don't think that the organization is linked to the development of the idea as much as answer C is.
Let us know if you got the answer for that. I got really curious.
I am with you on the second one. :)