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The democracy in Greece was an environment where everyone was equal in the eyes of the law. Not one person or family ruled the nation without having input from society, the democracy in Greece happened to allow every male a fair shot in politics no matter the social class he was placed in. This also opened many doors that may have been one of the steps to tolerance. Everyone had not only political freedom but they also had social freedom too. They didn’t give rude looks which may have helped keep some type of peace. The democracy in Greece also drew the line between personal affairs and political affairs. “We are free and tolerant in our private lives; but in public affairs we kept to the law.” (Document 3) Illustrates a dynamic of gracious professionalism and is a simple yet effective way to set a tone that distinguishes their society from many of the other governments. This may have also prompted countries later in history to govern in a similar fashion.